1. I have done plenty of research by you can always have more sources, and information to use in your paper. I think if i were to get more research it would be about the effects of childhood obesity.
2. I do not need to re order my paper
3. I think the way i present my points is in a logical format
4. I may be lacking in my trasitional paragraphs. I probably will make someone read my open sentences and see if i need to change or enhance anything.
5. I think i integraded my information i found very smoothly but i would always revice it more and see if i could do it better.
6. I have not put any visuals into my paper
7. I may need to have my quotes blended alittle better in my paper.
8. I have carefully avoided plagiarism in my paper, but i will revice is more to see if i missed any senetences that needed paraphrased.
9. I have analyzed and interpreted the ideas of other.
10. Yes i believe my ideas focus directly on my discussion with obesity.
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