revising sources

Berkowitz, Bobbie, and Marleyse, Borchard. "Advocating for the Prevention of Childhood Obesity: A Call to Action for Nursing." Online Journal of Issues in Nursing 14.1 (2009): 8. Academic Search complete. Web. 29 Sep 2009.
Ebbeling, Cara B., , Pawlak, Dorota B., Ludwig, David S. "Childhood obesity: public-health crisis, common sense cure.." Lancet; 360.933 (2002): 473-483 . Academic Search complete. Web. 29 Sep 2009.
Freedman, David S., , Khan, Laura Kettel, Dietz, William H., Berenson, Gerald S. "Relationship of Childhood Obesity to Coronary Heart Disease Risk Factors in Adulthood: The Bogalusa Heart Study.." Pediatrics 108.3 (2001): 712-719. Academic Search complete. Web. 29 Sep 2009.
Jeffery, Robert W, Judy, Baxter, and Maureen, McGuire. "Are Fast Food Restaurants an Environmental Risk Factor for Obesity?." International Journal of Behavioral Nutrition & Physical Activity 3. (2006): 1-6. Academic Search complete. Web. 29 Sept 2009

Kiess, W., A., Galler, A., Reich, G., Muller, and T., Kapellen."Clinical aspects of obesity in childhood and adolescence.." Obesity Reviews 2.1 (2001): 29-36. Academic Search complete. Web. 29 Sep 2009.
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Victoria Janoski

October 12, 2009

website 1) http://www.ext.colostate.edu/pubs/foodnut/09317.html

acuracy- This site seems pretty acurate, there are refrences at the bottom of the article.

credibility- I would trust this site for a source. When you look at the sight there is a name and date on the sight.

objectivity- there is no bias

currency-It seems all the references were from 2009 and also the copyright is in the 2009 so this makes it current

scope of coverage - The target audiance is directed to people that want to read into obesity more. These facts could be more directed to parents so they no how to gear there children into eating, and doing other healthy activities to not become obese.

websites sources

acuracy-reliable? is it badly written? references?
credibility-do you trust it? credentials
objectivity
currency- is it up to date?
scope of coverage

Oct 9th 2009 Paraphrasing and plagiarism

Paraphrasing-to put something in your own words
summerizing- paraphrasing but boiling it down
Plagiarism- copy and paste, using someones work without there permission

Turkle, Sherry. “Can You Hear Me Now?” Forbes Magazine. 5 May 2007. Rpt in “They Say/I say” The Moves That Matter in Academic Writing. Graff, Gerald. Birkenstein, Cathy, and Durst, Russel. New York, N.Y: W. W. Norton & Company, Inc, 270-280. Print.

Summaries for annoted bibliography

Honestly, I did not write summaries for my articles that i found yet becuase i wanted to see the comments that were put on my research proposal. However i know what i have to do and i have already read some of the articles i found. In spite of this I will have my summaries on my blog in a day or two. im planning on having over half of them done by friday because i'm going away for the weekend.

College: a time of wonder summary

College: A time of wonder Summary
Basically this article is about how all different groups of indivuals experience different things when coming into college. It’s different from freshmen to older adults to people from all other the world. It was about the changes and college including fear and everyone’s concerns. Everyone has different fears about college, either it being from being on your own, to if you will get along with your roommates, to maybe am I good enough to be here, these are all thoughts people will go through at the beginning of their journey here at school. Coming in as freshmen high schools are making them feel more overwhelmed and anxious than ever before in their lives. I think that college should be something to look forward to and not worry and stress about.